Juno recreation

During the recreation of Juno my group and I worked really hard and well together to create the best scenes that we possibly could. I feel like our edit went really well however there are some flaws. During the process of capturing the footage i played Juno and my other team mates Alex, Jono and Spencer did the filming and directing. Although i feel that their directing was very good and well thought out, they did miss telling me a few details. For example at 0:50 seconds Juno drinks her orange juice while walking down the path, i failed to do so as i was not informed of this. To improve this for next time the team and i will need to thoroughly analyse every detail of the clip and although we wrote it down on the story board we failed to remember to put it in. Other than this our footage was very accurate and precise on the costume and locations which really helped our footage match the real footage.
Another aspect we failed to do well were the timings of the video, luckily i was able to use a slow motion effect on the scenes to prevent this being obvious and dragging it out to the precise timings of the real footage. For example the first scene of me walking was far too fast that even slowing it down was not enough, because of this i had to double up my footage and add another similar footage on the end of it. After that i used the find edges effect to create a more cartoon look so that it is similar to the cartoon look on the original footage, i found it quite hard to edit this effect and get it as similar as possible. However i found in the end it was very successful and my edit to the footage looked relatively like a cartoon.
Due to all these flaws i am now able to take this onto my next footage and make sure i am unable to make the same mistakes and if i do i now know how to improve it and make it more professional looking.